Story bored
story of the cut scene
the main person in the story (Patrick) sets out with his two other companions to try and find the a machine that can turn the unhealthy land matter back in to land they can farm off. and give them new technology to help live tho the solar storms the planet is now ingofed in. as they reach the last know place of said machine they find out that Patrick little sister was following them all the way there. with the storm now baring down on them Patrick tries to save Jess but in the proses get hit by the storm and sent flying off the roof of the building. after that he has massive flash backs about his life and the thing he has seen in this life. then waking up but at home to find out that him and his little sister have been separated in the storm he must now go out and piece together his memory of what happened to her and hopefully find her in one piece?
list of people
1. Patrick
2 .rick
3. mike
4. jess
Scene 1
The team are standing on the hill looking down at the base where they are heading to. and can hear the sound of the coming storm.
emotion i wanted in scene.
i wanted it to be like there tired but there been driven by finding this thing.
speech.
1. wow look at that.
2. yeah that is something. plus i think we are all most there.
3. we must get going i think another solour storm is comeing this way.
2. god dam he right i can feel it to.
1. right then we must press on.
camera.
it more in the middle of them all then swoops in to revel the base.
Scene 2
Story in scene
emotion i wanted in scene.
superstition. and a worried chill as they know the storm get closer
speech
2. mike go up on the roof and see if there a way in.
3. ok. im on it. "climbs ladder"
2. pat do you think its here.
1"checks map" hmmm im sure we are closing in on it.
3. " shouts from above" HEY GUYS! THERES A WAY IN UP HERE.
1. ok lets go team.
" rest of them climb up"
camera.
at the start i would like it to follow them as if looking though the trees at them. then pans around to show them taking and then a close up of them climbing up.
scene 3.
note this seen has been cut because i had a feeling that it would draw away from the 3 others at this point in the story.
story
jess is hiding behind a rock as she watches the team climb up on to the roof.
speech
4. "looks over rock" (think to self) hmm i wander where there going to.
camera
would be behind Jess as if looking tho her eyes. but still seeing her in the frame but only just.
scene 4
story
the team move in to the base. it is a wreck in side dripping pipes and wind wissing tho the holes in the wall. they split up and look around a lot more only finding bits and bobs.
emotion i wanted in scene.
spookiness and that sense that something might be watching them.
Speech
1. hey whats down there.
3. nothing much some food and tools. some we can use tho.
1. sounds good how about the machine.
3 nope nothing here but the files said it was here at some point.
1 hmm maybe they made it here i don't know keep looking.
2. umm guys you should come see this.
camra
i would have wanted it to flow tho the building showing off all the deca but at the same time still showing the guys and what they are doing. hopefully it would give off a gloomy effect.
scene 5
story
the guys go over the the window to see Jess climbing down the rock in to the base.
emotion.
surpire and from pat stress about the safety of jess.
speech
2. we are being followed.
3. what !
1. who is it
2 .well i think its ...... JESS!
1. wait WHAT!
camera
looking over the team giving a view of Jess climbing down
scene 6
story the the team run out on to the roof to talk to Jess.
emotion in scene
pissed off and worried
speech
1. Jess what the hell i told you to stay at home.
4. but i wanted to come and help you.
1 stay there rick and mike are coming to get you.
4 ummm ok.
camera
i would have it at the feet of pat looking down at Jess
scene 7
as the other two guys run down stairs to get jess the massive wind of solar storm hits the base setting pat flying off the building and blowing jess away.
emotion
i wanted it to one of those moments in a game where the player think everthing ok and its all going to be fine. then BAM it hits.
speech
4. whats with all the wind.
1. its the storm. This is why i told you to stay at home.
4. but i ca ..
1. AHHHhhhhhhhhh "hits floor"
4 NOOooOOOOoOOO
camera
kind of looking down at her but the follows him down as he falls off the building.
scene 8
pat blacks out. and starts to hear the sines form when the first storm hit the world. and then cuts in to some merc's he meet earlier on in his life talking in Russian. then bam he wakes up.
emotion
i would like it to be sad and also wandering about why is his life flashing be for him.
speech
Russian.
camera
black with burly pictures of his past.
sounds in the 5 min piece.
.wind. http://www.freesound.org/people/ERH/sounds/34338/
. wind 2 http://www.freesound.org/people/medialint/sounds/11863/
.cuckoo http://www.freesound.org/people/acclivity/sounds/19561/
walking 1 http://www.freesound.org/people/Robinhood76/sounds/55690/
crickets http://www.freesound.org/people/TicTacShutUp/sounds/420/
running up stairs http://www.freesound.org/people/RutgerMuller/sounds/51163/
storm. http://www.freesound.org/people/RHumphries/sounds/2523/
statice http://www.freesound.org/people/Percy%20Duke/sounds/23503/
falling http://www.freesound.org/people/pauliep83/sounds/33675/
all voice is recorded by me.
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